Feedback
29/11/11 06:33
The feedback from assignment 2 was more concerned with the refinement of my portfolio proposal that was sent at the same time, rather than the 3 sets of images, which have been described as a “muscle-flexing” exercise. That said though, the video was described as having terrific potential and it was questioned whether this could form part of the portfolio. I don’t think it can, well, not if I want to maintain my intentions of presenting the work as a book. It’s something to think about though, even if I’m completely at a loss as to how I might incorporate it, even if I do move away from the book idea. I have been mulling the idea of an iPad app, and if this could be done, well video would be easy to include. We’ll see - the app might be too much work at the moment, I’m feeling stretched as it is.
The approaching car theme was also commented upon as being something that might be included in the landscape strand of the portfolio, and perhaps this might be an idea as, apart from the final printing, the Landscape module Night Walks series was well received. How will I work this in? I’ve no idea, and I’m not currently so sure I want to either - I see this as a different strand of work. How would it play against the other images? I think it might be a little too disjointed, although I’ve also played with working the landscapes in mono, so why not…?
As for the proposal, I’m having difficulty saying what I mean, and I’ve been using quotes from other artists in a way that is probably out of context. I’ll keep on working it; and as Jose said, I’ll refine it as the images come along...
The approaching car theme was also commented upon as being something that might be included in the landscape strand of the portfolio, and perhaps this might be an idea as, apart from the final printing, the Landscape module Night Walks series was well received. How will I work this in? I’ve no idea, and I’m not currently so sure I want to either - I see this as a different strand of work. How would it play against the other images? I think it might be a little too disjointed, although I’ve also played with working the landscapes in mono, so why not…?
As for the proposal, I’m having difficulty saying what I mean, and I’ve been using quotes from other artists in a way that is probably out of context. I’ll keep on working it; and as Jose said, I’ll refine it as the images come along...
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